http://ichibanseiken.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] ichibanseiken.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] owned_by_a_cat 2012-11-04 12:38 am (UTC)

Shuuhei the reckless driver - the reckless everything, it seems. "Moderate your speed. Now." That made me smile. I like the extra backstory, and the way you accentuated the dramatic tension toward the end of the chapter. Now I'll be biting my nails until you let us know what's going in with Dr. Abarai. Wait, the mineral deposit he found - I hope that wasn't Kryptonite. Could it be he got too close to his samples in that crowded car of his?

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