Date: 2015-10-10 08:08 pm (UTC)
oooh! That was fabulous!

"Major Kim Jaejoong was a sniper of the elite solo patrol. He was someone who spent weeks without seeing or speaking to another person. He could lie in wait for days until he had the perfect shot. He had more patience in his little finger than Changmin could acquire if he lived to be a thousand.
"It took over two hours.

"By then, Jaejoong had served jjigae, chestnut rice and fried chicken. They'd eaten and demolished more of Jaejoong's beer store than was maybe truly wise.

Loved these lines and the images they created for me.

Loved what Jae said here:
"Stay here?" Jaejoong's voice was an intriguing mix of hesitant and sultry. "I'm sorry I overreacted when I saw the pendant earlier. I'm sorry I ruined the mood. There's no excuse for interrupting a kiss that good."

What a great line!

I was surprised that Changmin took the more dominant role in the love-making. Not sure why. I loved the finish. Loved that Jae could tell what Changmin needed in order to let go.

The last line made me laugh out loud.

I'm not at all surprised that this is the story you're updating. After Jaejoong at the army festival, how could you not?! Thanks!
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