Date: 2015-07-31 02:44 am (UTC)
I have followed your writing for quite some time now, and greatly enjoyed it. I immediately latch on to anything you post.

But reading this, I'm convinced you have been playing with us.

This is stunning! I'm floored by it at every level: words, sentences, paragraphs, all dazzling in perfect composition.

Context: a city in the clouds—immediately suggesting a larger reality behind the plot (what's on the ground?).

Supreme characterization: different Guilds and their members, bringing in conflict (which every good story requires).

And finally, a seamless transition into the fandom (TVXQ Homin) without a hitch.

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